First thought, shitty beard. Second thought, I love the editing and the semi-foreshadowing to corn. Loved the stories however I feel you need to preface who we lived with and maybe our bathroom scene with the tv. Like if its a long ben sloane entry, do a little ben sloane bio... or a story about ben. Just a thought
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First thought, shitty beard. Second thought, I love the editing and the semi-foreshadowing to corn. Loved the stories however I feel you need to preface who we lived with and maybe our bathroom scene with the tv. Like if its a long ben sloane entry, do a little ben sloane bio... or a story about ben. Just a thought
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